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(Updating as critique comes from Serious Writers) When evil lurks in the shadows of a group of powerful girls, a new cloaked person appears. Nobody knows who it is, not even the Elders of the West. Could it be the legendary Wayfarer? Could it be Twilight, the one who destroyed the Elders of the East? Book 1 in the Moonhigh saga.
Liz is vexed up with her not sober father, She felt alone since her mother's death. She wanted some one that she can look up to. Mike becomes her crying shoulder since then but when she discovers his dark secret, she walks away from him but Mike is not willing to let her go. Max had been Liz's friend ever since he can remember but when she goes missing he realizes that she is more to him. Was she alive as he believes?
A warrior was behind Blackstar, and attacked her. She yowled with pain, and went limp for a couple of minutes. The warrior thought she was dead, and let her go. Then Blackstar sprang on the warrior without warning. Instead of landing on top, the warrior pushed her and pinned her to the ground. "You think I wasn't expecting that?" Hissed the warrior. Blackstar kicked the warrior off and looked deep into his eyes. Then she realized who this was. She backed up slowly and her mind went