Genre - Fiction. You are on the page - 640

I'm just brainstorming here, and I want to see what people think about my intro/setting. Please message me what you think and how I can change it, if I need to.

Nalia and Belle are half sisters, who adore each other. Unlike other half siblings, Nalia and Belle are the same age and only months apart, they also look alike, but are almost complete opposites. Only days away from Belle's sixteenth birthday, she starts getting these strange feelings and having really weird dreams. She wakes up with bruises and scratches and marks that she didn't go to sleep with. She doesn't understand what's going on. Nalia is no different, but while Belle is starting to

He was covered in sweat, his eyes bloodshot from tears, and urine dripped down his pants. He was 15ft away from them when he tripped. Something jumped over the boy and landed close to him. The young man reached his hands towards them, crying out. The thing grabed him and dragged him back towards the stairs. The person clawed desperatly at the ground causing his nails to rip up and blood slid over the floor. His terrorized face dissapeared, hidden from view as he was dragged down. The doors shut

(Excerpts--Chapter 1,2,5,6,8,10) Three atypical angels come to help Clark Hern find true love after having experienced an emotional divorce. ManHeart is overflowing with romance, desire, sensuality, and spiritual teaching. Boston Lee has studied and practiced several of the world's religions and holds a PhD in Theology.