21 Dope Street by Kagelynn Isom (reading diary txt) 📕

picture’s?
SNOOKIE
that’s me on the sax with chuck berry, I played session work for the stax records ane a couple of labels, with litle rickard and kats like sam and dave, otis reding Aretha franklin, bo didley, elvis presley.. Ect
JACK
Wow
I have no idea what you are talking about!
SNOOKIE
(laughs)
So you met any one with fame like that?
JACK
Me? No way man, I’m just a party hardy guy from the poor side of town
SNOOKIE
(pulls out a weed pipe and takes a hit, hands it to jack he takes one too)
(a diyan walks in, and sits next to jack)
SNOOKIE
Seen some hard times too, my man
(jack pases the pipe to diyan)
Hello beautiful
DYAN
Hey smokes..
(looks at jack)
Hey big boy
JACK
Hey
SNOOKIE
You can’t go back and do it over son, but you sure as hell can go forward, and make it better… may be that’s why I brought you back here.
JACK
Did you?
(dyan leaves the room)
SNOOKIE
Did I?
I don’t know son
To show you can do it, I saw you playing at rorys steak house. That honky tonk gig with the ruffled shirts just ant you
JACK
It was just for some bread so I can come here
(snookie talks over jack)
SNOOKIE
You got some good talent, I can smell it.
JACK
You can smell it?
SNOOKIE
Yes I can smell it, but who’s gonna believe in you if you don’t even believe in yourself.
JACK
You have been smoking too much, but I feel yeah man
SNOOKIE
Hug a brotha’
JACK
(jack jumps up and hugs him like a father)
Even my father never talked to me like that.
(they stop hugging)
He just yell and hit things
SNOOKIE
That what a father does
(jack starts to cry)
when he gives up hope for his kids .. Or maybe he’s really saying is, you think you’re a loser but I think my sons a winner who has not found the kay yet… just reverse the psychology and start the new journey, jack
JACK
Man I mean
(chocks up)
I mean just so right on, I don’t know what to say
(takes a hit)
Peace and love brother snookie, love ya man, I really mean it
(pat benatar bursts in)
PAT BENATAR
(gravely voice)
Hey snookie, where ya keep the good stuff
(she looks at jack and winks)
SNOOKIE
Uh yeah
PAT BENATAR
(to jack)
Hey baby, wanna have a mama rock you in the cradle?
(the song rock you in the cradle, plays in the back)
SNOOKIE
(winks, then smiles at jack)
JACK
(smiles and wips his face, then laughs alittle)
SNOOKIE
Hold on beautiful, I got a litle of southern comport right in this drawer
(while saying he gets it then hands it to pat)
PAT BENATAR
Okay.. Nice.. Okay cool cats I’m on..
(to jack)
Sexy you wanna come with me?
JACK
Uh
(looks at snookie for the answer)
(snookie gives the okay on his face)
JACK
(to pat)
Yeah
(he gets up and walks out the door)
FADES OUT
FADES IN
EXT. BACK STAGE-NIGHT
PAT BENATAR
Here you have the hit first
JACK
Woah, I can’t
PAT BENATAR
Why?
JACK
I had too much already.. And I feel bad for the tree’s.. oh my gosh, we should do something right now!
PAT BENATAR
His shiz made you like a hippie, you have to smoke this stuff, ummm.. It helps the tree’s?!
JACK
It does?
PAT BENATAR
Yeah, here.
(jack takes a hit really fast)
( the camera goes in a blur and spins in a weird way, the voises are cuft)
PAT BENATAR
Are you okay baby?
JACK
…what?
PAT BENATAR
Are you okay? You have been standing thre for 10 minutes
JACK
I have?
PAT BENATAR
(laughs)
Yes
(she kisses him)
I have to go on stage now
(jack the whole time is like in a trance and stands in the same spot for another 10 minutes)
(the color and spining is only there when it has jack on screen)
COP 1
(at jack)
Why are you back here?
JACK
(his transe breaks)
What?
COP 1
(punch’s jack)
(jack falls, and the screen goes to black)
FADES TO BLACK
FADES IN TO A BRIGHT LIGHT
JACK
( jack opens his eye’s to Elena and Janis, snookie hovering over him)
(voise over)
The cop beat me up he is bad, him and the other cop killed the girl, please he was the one who beat up tom, please he’s going o killl me, you can get him he‘s here, he punched me and kept kicking---
(out loud)
---What.. Wha.. Cop… bad… me.. Him…the girl
ELENA
Um.. Does any of you know what he said?
SNOOKIE
Not a thing
PAT BENATAR
He said something about a cop… bad me him the girl
ELENA
What did he take?
PAT BENATAR
Too much, we should just leave him alone to think or something, anyways I have to go back on
(she walks to the stage)
ELENA
Maybe we should give him a pen!
SNOOKIE
Yeah lets do that
(they sit him up and give him paper and a pen)
FADES-OUT
FADES IN
(Cuts flash’s of the concert)
(pat benatar is on stage and singing, almost done)
(1 minute of the song is left the song‘ hate my self for loving you‘)
PAT BENATAR
I wanna thank you for the fun time, have fun with the next band!
(she screems then walks off stage to jack)
FADES IN
(jack is asleep)
(pat walks up to jack and see’s he wrote a script)
PAT BENATAR
Holly molly he wrote a script in only 30 minutes
(she holds it up)
(the script says, 21 dope street by jack greens, Kagelynn Isom, prince gery werron)
(her eye’s go wide)
(she sets it back, then leaves)
FADES-OUT
FADES-IN
EXT. CONCERT-NIGHT
(jack catches the rest of the concert, bob marlyn plays after pat. jack is heavy mind tripping he has a revelation of himself on stage playing the star spangled banner at a later date in time)
(bob is playing that song )
INT. CONCERT-NIGHT
(jack makes his way to his friends, with his script in his back pocket)
JACK
I see it man, I see it all.....so clearly now!
STEVEN
see what dude?
JOHNNY
like what space ships
(laughs)
JACK
no man the light I see it I see the light, it's everywhere ,everything, it's love dude! I just didn't recognized it　, it was there all along .
JOHNNY
it's just the light show dude,
(looks at the lasers)
whoa I'm floating like a cloud
(laughs)
STEVEN
(laughs)
like a cloud must be all this pot smoke floating around your head, but what.　
JOHNNY
but what, but what, you're blowing my high man....
STEVEN
and you're blowing fairy smoke outta you're cheesy donkey
(laughs)
(show a donkey and one eye is holding him)
JOHNNY
My donkey has nothing to do with it!
I gotta hunk of chunk for yeah dude smells like limburger
(smiles)
STEVEN
well dude keep floating ....like Mohammad a lil, like a butterfly cause your, your scent is stinging my　eyes
(laughs)
(jack is oblivious to everything around him, a face like his mind is expanding)
JACK
all you needs is love man that’s all you need .dude John Lennon was right on!! he must a seen beyond the material world in to the eye of creation that’s what I think, man. it's like if love was champion then all our troubles would drift　 away like smoke… like clouds.........
STEVEN
ooh man he is high as one eye now, he's talking like you and wasn't I the one who found you hiding in the bushes after you escaped the mental house
(laughs)
JOHNNY
yeah that half way house was full of freaks　but I think dope street is worse
(laughs)
JACK
Oh that reminds me
(he shows them his script)
JOHNNY
What time did you write this?
JACK
A secent ago
JOHNNY
Wow you are also a jenuse
JACK
Wheres Elena?
FADES-OUT
EXT. CONCERT-DAY
CUT-IN
(they all exit the show a sea of bottles, beer cans, blankets, cigarette butts etch.)
STEVEN
say jack?
JACK
What!
STEVEN
seriously what’s　that you said with　falls and stuff? I mean bro what were you talking about?
(jack looks at both then up to a starry sky a meteor　 falls and explodes like fireworks)
(Dyane west who jack saw backstage with the groupies, yells out)　
DYAIN WEST
hey jack it's me Dyane ...　
INT. BACKSTAGE-DAY
(cut to scene of back stage as snookie opens his office door Dyane introduces herself to jack )
DYAIN
Hi, are you in the band baby?
I'm Dyane west maybe you heard of me?
you know the late　Jim Morrison’s (friend)
I was with him that week at the hotel in Hollywood when he died !!
(jack is caught off guard)
JACK
uh huh
I think… well no not really but …hi
(cut back to concert exit scene)
EXT. CONTERT-DAY
DYAIN
Hi, I’m free for the night!!
wanna smoke some dynamite hash?
I got some back at my crib.
JACK
ooh yeah say some dynamite chicken, way raad.
(turns to Steven)
JACK
hey dude take my car, the door key is the blue one, you　guys can crash over again, ok?
JOHNNY
what about Daisey dude?
what if something bad happened ?　
JACK
aah I bet she got hung up on something…or stayed　with her mom and dad. its all cool. I'll be back really soon
FADES-OUT
CUTS-IN
EXT. HOSPITAL-DAY
(show a view of it)
INT. HOSPITAL-DAY
(the camera starts with the bible in the mother’s lap)
(cut to hospital scene with daisey holding a rosemary and kneeling at her fathers bed)
DOCTOR
he had been into a coma for a week now. from his old war wound. the bullet fragment’s took a stab into his heart over time.
DAISEY
I love you daddy I know we’ve been distant lately but I truly wanna　make up for that now, I remember all my birthdays and charismas and every time you took me for ice cream or gave me a kiss and called me daddy’s little girl .......she sobs...........please don't die daddy, we love you mom needs you
(her mother is asleep in a chair bible in her lap)　
DAISEY
just wake up please, please for gods sake don’t die!　
(She kisses his lips,　and sinks her head into his chest)
NURSE
I'm afraid you have to go home now the doctors say there is nothing we can do I 'm so sorry to be the bearer of bad news this is the hardest part of my job miss Johansson
DAISEY
please can we stay a little while longer I'm really scared ....
NURSE
I'm so sorry but it's the rules visiting hours are 3 am to 9 pm I wish I could help.
DAISEY
mother wake up we have to go,
visiting hours are over c’mon lets take you home,
we’ve had a most triumphant day,
let’s stop and get some fast food,
you need to eat and I haven’t eaten all night.
FADES-OUT
SLIDS-IN
EXT. 21 DOPESTREET-DAY
INT. 21 DOPE STREET- DAY
ELENA
I’m telling you the truth, he knows who it is
FULLER
How do you know he didn’t do it?
ELENA
What if I talk to him about it?
FULLER
You cant blow your cover
ELENA
Well what if one of them do it?
FULLER
(to hanson)
Did you see anything?
HANSON
(is seeing birds, fake ones)
Um no I was… not there
FULLER
Pinhall?
PINHALL
What dad?
FULLER
(to pinhall)
What? Have you takein anything?
ELENA
No he just, yeah he thought is was aleav!
FULLER
For that mistake
(to pinhall)
Your blowing your cover today
FADES-OUT
FADE-IN
EXT. SCHOOL-DAY
(show every one going in the school)
INT. HALLWAY-DAY
(jack is still high from the concert, pinhall walks up to jack)
PINHALL
Hey jack!
(the bell rings)
JACK
What?
PINHALL