life of a horse by kindy mined, caley paters, paterson lalaburty, mycayla lee (reading like a writer txt) 📕

Ali remembered the last time she was told to jump. The horse tripped really badly and almost fell. Ali got out of control and the horse reared and she was swung from the saddle right in the wall. It flashed in her mind. "Ali? Earth to Ali?" Holly asked. Ali realized she was daydreaming and then she kicked Ollie. She knew this wouldn't happen again. Ollie was a good boy and she knew it. He started a nice trot and launched off from the ground. For a second, Ali felt like she was flying. A thump hit the ground. She was alive. "Amazing. Isn't Ollie great?" Holly was surprised. Ali slowly trotted to Holly and nodded toward her. Ali was already putting Ollie back in the dirty coral he stays in, when she remembered she had some carrots in her back pocket. She took one out and secretly fed Ollie one then put the rest in his empty bucket that was hanging on a hook on the fence. She smiled. When Ali and her mom were home, Ali asked, " Mom, since were only 5 minutes away from the barn can I visit there after school?" Ali's mom was thinking pretty hard, cause she was doing the look. One eyebrow up with eyes up. "I guess so. By the way, which horse did you ride? I was talking to Mrs. Hailey the whole time." Her mom said. Inside Ali was so excited. But then she had to answer her question. "Ollie." Ali said trying to hold her happiness inside. "Was he nice?" Mom asked. "Definitely! He has a amazing walk, trot and canter. And the best jump ever!" Ali realized she was yelling then quieted down. The next day at school, Ali was shaking so much that she was asked to go to the nurse! She had to go home for no reason. One of the reasons, was she looked moon blinked. And the nurse was crept out by her. Ali ran home and went to the barn. She remembered to pack carrots and peppermints in her lunch box. Ollie was staring at a bird when he heard the rustle of the bag. Except when he trotted toward her he fell to the ground instantly.

Ali jumped over the fence quickly and fell to Ollie's side. He whinnied in pain. Ali started to panic wildly. Finally, she rushed inside the barn and screamed, "Help Ollie's hurt! Ollie's Hurt!" Everyone listened to her. The owner heard her and ran to Ollie. Holly came as well holding a phone. "Should I call the vet?" Holly asked quickly. Mrs. Hailey nodded, closely examining Ollie's leg and the hoofprints he made. Holly started to dial the vet's number. When she answered Holly spoke words Ali didn't even understand. All she could think about is if he was going to make it. The vet came in 5 minutes and Ollie was laying in the sick horse stall at the back, nice and cozy. Ali sat on one of the chests. She tried to hold back tears. Finally Jamie one of the riders, told Ali she could go see Ollie. Ali took one breath and held the rest in. Every step she took felt like a 100 miles. She slowly pushed through the crowd and gasped. Ollie, the once beautiful chestnut was in a sling, holding most of his body weight. His eyes were closed and his chest only went up a second and then down very slowly. Ali cried. She cried like she never cried . Everywhere she looked Ollie had some sort of wire connected to him. "Is, is he dead?" Ali said, struggling to find her voice. "No. He's in a very deep sleep. He might not wake up for a while." Mrs. Hailey said. Ali looked down. She couldn't find words. Not even one.When everybody left Ali pulled out a flower and peppermint from her pocket. She put it next to him and kissed his head. Then she left. She said nothing else for the rest of the day when she got home. At night, Ali's heart ached. When she finally fell asleep, things got even worse. In her dream, she was rewinding everything that happened when she jumped an X. Everything that happened when she met Ollie. Even the time she last saw his eyes glimmer into hers. Then things got terrible. Ollie broke his back and neck. And died. He got shot. He got killed. He is dead. It all rewinded into fast motion into Ali. Goodbye Ollie. Ali finally woke up from that worse than a nightmare horror movie. She was crying and trembling. Is that really the end for her beautiful chestnut?

Ali looked outside her window. She was pacing in her mind. The dream last night haunted her strongly. She broke out in tears every time she thought about what was going to happen to Ollie. "Ali! Come down here, sweetie!" Ali's mom called from downstairs. Ali managed to crawl out her bed. Her heart ached terribly. It felt worse than when she lost Kiki. Kiki. Ali looked at the ribbons. Then at the picture she kept on her wall. Kiki. His soft brown fur. Blue eyes and stripe. Then it all rewinded in her. Jumping. Galloping. Bareback. Painting him. Even the funny things he did. Like smile when Ali gave him a treat and beg. And responding to her whenever she said him name. Ali walked downstairs. Heartbroken once again. She saw her mom outside and opened the door. She looked up and stood frozen. Kiki. He was in her front yard. She ran toward him and tightly hugged his neck. She cried into his shoulder. "Mom. What is he doing here!?" She asked. Barely speaking. She was so happy. She didn't even think about Ollie.

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Ollie - Chapter 6

by Caroline (Kildeer, IL)

"Well, Kiki is staying here for 2 days then he's going ba-." Ali's mom was interrupted by her phone. It was a new text. She replied and kept talking. "Make that until tomorrow that he's going to back to Texas." She smiled. "Oh." Ali mumbled, hiding disappointment. "You get to ride this weekend though! Also, Ollie's better!" Her mom added on. Suddenly her daughter cheered up instantly. She put on the brightest smile she could. But first she wanted to spend time with Kiki. "Can I ride him bareback?" Ali asked pointing at the brown pony. Her mom nodded and she took the lead rope. Ali walked him to the backyard. Put him in the empty corral they used for him and tied him there. She still had a bridle and saddle in the shed. But she was going bareback so she only needed the bridle. Ali took Kiki's halter and rope off and slipped in the bit. She stretched it through his ears and fastened the straps. Ali slowly led him out of the corral and climbed on from the fence. She comfortable slumped down but straightened up again. She squeezed him and he accidently cantered. suddenly Ali pulled on the reins. "What's gotten into you? You never canter when I squeeze!" Ali said. She squeezed again and this time he galloped! She fell off and landed on the grass. Kiki cantered a 6 feet away and bucked high in the sky. She backed up crawling. Kiki never acted like this. She stood up and grabbed the pony's hanging reins. Ali saddled him up and got on. She put her heels down and sat up straight. She kicked him this time and he cantered a nice straight line. Ali was really confused. After an hour of riding she got off and put him in the corral. The next day, Ali saw Kiki go in the trailer and ride away. But it was Saturday. Riding until Tuesday. She got dressed and drove there. "Bye sweetie!" Her mom called from the car. "Bye!" Ali smiled and walked toward the barn. She smiled so bright. "Hi Holly! " She greeted when she saw Holly tacking up Ollie. "Hi kiddo? You ready to ride?" She asked as she finished buckling the straps for the bridle. Ali nodded quickly. She strapped on her helmet and took Ollie's reins. "Oh, didn't you hear? Your not riding him." Holly got the reins again. "Who is then?" Ali asked. She got all her excitement up for nothing. "Maya is." She said as a blonde haired girl took his reins. She had an evil look on her face and was holding a crop that said her name. "Hi." Maya said as she walked away in the arena. "who am I riding then?" She asked. " Duncan." Holly pointed to the last horse on the cross ties. He was a nice buckskin color with a cute bald face. He was ground tied though. "Are you sure he wont run away? " Ali asked, looking at Duncan then Holly. Holly shook her head. Ali walked toward him walked him to the arena. She checked her girth and got on.

 Bang! I ran blindly in the dark night, looking, searching... Hopeing. I whinnied into the dark, then waited for a response. Nothing. No animals were moving. I was alone. I tried to call again, and again, and again. But no response ever came.All I remember was my mother telling me to run, run as fast and hard as I could. She told me not to look back, keep looking forward. I did as she told me to, but I do t think she was as lucky as me. I continued to walk, looking at the ground, hoping that I might suddenly run into another horse. I wandered for hours till my legs were numb and I fell to the ground with raspy breathing and an empty feeling. I eventually fell asleep and when I woke the sun was bright and the skies were clear. It was nearly half day, or at least I presumed it was. I slowly got up, and realized how sore my muscles were. I shook out my mane and the. Remembered what happens that night. I looked around with ears pricked and my eyes alert. Since its daytime it will be easier to try and find my herd, I told myself. I started out slowly walking, stopping every now and then to eat some green grass. Today the birds were singing and flying out in the sky, but I didn't pay attention to them. All I cared about was trying to find other horses. A little filly like me could never survive out here by myself. There are coyotes and other dangerous animals that are looking for an easy Dinner. I herd a sudden clashing noise. One I haven't heard before. I flick my ears toward to try and understand it. I look around but nothing is in sight. I then hear faint but