Genre - Short Story. You are on the page - 187

Chapter 2 of my novel "The Shepherd". Please tell me how you like the novel so far, and how I make it better. Please comment and leave feedback.

Stories of fiction off Life. The joy of these are the chance to tell a story in another way. By doing that more things can be shared with more people.

Sometime the best lessons are learned from the young, if we only paid closer attention. So often we miss "pearls of wisdom" by assuming "they are just kids at play". Hopefully the wisdom of Frederick and Stanley get all of us to do some deeper thinking.

A Christmas disaster at the North Pole is averted by a long-held elfish secret. Will it cause the barer more trouble than the Christmas disaster?

Hi! I wrote this story for my NAPLAN test. It's all pretty much how i wrote it for the test, I just edited a few mistakes. I also planned a different ending but ran out of time so I did this instead. It's pretty short but I hope you enjoy it. Please comment and give me feedback/tell me what you think. Thanks! :)