Books author - "Yolla Will"

So Guys this book is my first :) I 've always wanted to write one but never had the courage ..but here I am now publishing ( A life to start ) I hope u guys like it . It's about a girl called Annabelle who has a lot of trouble in her life and who lost her Best Friend . She becomes desperate until Life opens up the door for her and gives her a chance to live . Feel free to comment and I would really be grateful to know ur opinions about my book ! Its only the first chapter so it wont take more